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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ # Continuwuity
 
 ## What is Continuwuity?
 
-Continuwuity is a Matrix homeserver. [Matrix] is an open chat network that lets anyone talk to anyone, no matter what server or address they use - sort of like email.
+Continuwuity is a Matrix homeserver. [Matrix] is an open chat network that lets anyone talk to anyone, no matter what server or address they use - like email.
 
 Continuwuity receives and keeps track of all your messages, and delivers what you send to the right people.
 
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ ## What is Continuwuity?
 
 ## Why is Continuwuity different?
 
-Continuwuity is light and fast, using a fraction of the resource of other major homeservers. It's also simple to set up, and secure by default.
+Continuwuity is light and fast, using a fraction of the resources of other major homeservers. It's also simple to set up, and secure by default.
 
-We are a community-run project, filled with diverse and friendly people. Everything is built by people who care about the project volunteering their free time.
+We are a community-run project, made up of friendly and diverse people. Everything is built by people who care about the project volunteering their free time.
 
 ## Deploying Continuwuity